*Update*
So das ist jetzt das "überarbeitete" Anschreiben....
ZitatAlles anzeigenDear xxx,
I would like to apply for a traineeship in your company from June 8th to June 26th 2009. I am attending a commercial high school with the focus on business studies in Leverkusen-Opladen in Germany. My aim is to finish within next year after having passed my A-Levels.
I would deeply appreciate it if I could get the possibility to gain experience at your company and also have the opportunity to improve my English in a business environment.
Due to my training I have theoretical knowledge of bookkeeping after German Commercial Code and cost accounting of industrial plants. Furthermore I’m very skilled in working with Windows-OS and Microsoft Office.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Und folgende persönlichen Dinge würde/soll ich noch ergänzen. Abgesehen vom sprachlichen bin ich gerade am überlegen wo ich die Sätze im Anschreiben einbinden soll. Vom Gefühl her würde ich die persönlichen Texte unter dem Absatz von Mircodoof einbinden oder?
At the moment I am 17 years old but I will get eighteen before I will attend the traineeship/At time I’m 17 years old and my birthday is at March also I will be 18 years old at the traineeship.
In my free time I play in a Club handball and I’m a handball referee (Schiedsrichter, soll das heißen), too. My personally strengths are to argue, to work singly, but I can also work good in a team. My teachers value at me that I’m very trustworthy and my motivation at school. (leistungsbereitschaft).
Was könnte ich noch für persönliche Dinge über mich schreiben, damit er nen besseren Eindruck von mir bekommt?